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There are many elements you could have talked about on here to increse your grade. For example, When you are discussing the stereotypical boy in the film you need to relate it to the genre of thriller and tackle th issues of technology which is typicl for a teenage boy to use and the audience can relate to the technology. You discuss the forest area well but lack insight into Slender man the game. This is convergence which is topical of the film industry at the moment. E.g. comics/books/computer games becoming films. Mention this please!
ReplyDeleteFinally you need more evidence to suggest that you film is representative of a particular genre and audience.